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[[GrayZ} Dream Trance {ReMiX}]

It's not clogging...

If there is improvement. I mean, This is AWESOME. There's more here than I remembered from the last ones, and I can't complain about any of it (Except one tiny thing... More on that later). But, if this were the same as the last one, plus 5 seconds, minus the clicking... Yeah, you wouldn't get much support there from me...

So, remember that difference. Don't repost... Remix is fine, because it's new, or it should be.

Now, that one thing. The ending. It's that slightly reverbed rapid fade. I think you can do better than that man. Have it climb, stop, kick back in, and have a long proper fade out, instead of 15 seconds of pulsing echos, if you get my drift.

Other than that, Keep going. You're on the road to epic. Now get there.

~Sir_Furious

GrayZ responds:

Thanks so much for your support, You're one of the main reasons I am improving and I must thank you for that. If I ever make it to epic awesome itunes standard I'll make sure you can have free albums. :) Thanks so much for your support man.

[ReMotion (prev) - Kr1z & F-777]

I've heard some tones to rythm...

But THIS is music. indescribably EPIC. Gratz, and thanks for the music.

~Sir_Furious

F-777 responds:

Thanks so much man!

[{GrayZ} Dream Trance {RemiX}]

Nice...

I must agree... The very static sound at the beginning aren't doing much for ya, but the composition is sound, and the mixing is good. Just try to get clearer instruments in there... Noise Channels aren't always the best to listen to, so try to fade them out, and get a better ending than that oscillating fade. I know you can do it.

~Sir_Furious

[{GrayZ} Emotion]

Aye, Mastering...

The closing is also way to fast. AKA, it feels like it just stops, without a wind down. While that may be for emphasis or something, it's just not as good as a good wind down.

Anyone who votes this down is judging on other standards. You are GrayZ. I am judging you on the grounds of GrayZ, and not of X. If I were judging on the grounds of "X is awesome, you aren't", then you would get a 0. Some people can't change, so unless they give you good reasons, ignore the bombers.

Keep it up, and get mastering your own stuff. Being dependent upon others to get your own art done, whether it's music, or writing, can be crippling. So, the sooner your able to get it done yourself, then get there. You'll be thankful, trust me. :)

~Sir_Furious

GrayZ responds:

Thanks alot man I like how you review me on progress and not of other peoples skill, its really cool + is a really nice boost, I'll look at some guides on mastering and hopefully be able to keep stuff under 2284927438239492456 DB :P

thanks for the review

[{GrayZ} DnB Fuckabout]

It's good at what it's about...

But... Well... What happened to composition? :3

The bass is good, and the rhythm is pretty solid. Don't leave this behind. Finish it some day, and then let us see what you were/are capable of.

~Sir_Furious

GrayZ responds:

:) Thanks alot man was just a muck about really, I'll get it finished someday :) Thanks for been a solid reviewer! :D

[{GrayZ}] Emotion {DEMO}]

Mastering does need done...

But concepts work, eh?

The quaky feeling is nice. It's kinda setting a tone for a very Sci-Fi effect. Notice, how in all GOOD Sci-fi, where things are very diffrent, they are pointing out the steady things in humanity. Sometimes, it's greed, sometimes, it's love...

While the bass line is in flux, unstable, there is an evolving theme that remains steady in the melody through the whole thing. Moar plz. 8 because of mastering and... C'mon, I ain't giving a 10 on an unfinished work. :P

~Sir_Furious

GrayZ responds:

Thanks alot man! :) I'm still really new to composing on FL so I really don't know where to start with mastering + my friend who can master is on holiday atm =[ Thanks alot for the review :)

[+- Frozen Arcadia -+]

Ice...

Water, Cold, Peaceful... All these words are becoming known. I suppose AzureVixen is a good name, and that shade of blue, and the female fox both seem to fit this theme that keeps coming. And getting better. All this atmospheric trance is good. Bring us more please. We'll give you cookies! :P

~Sir_Furious

[+-Symphony of the Night-+]

Very touching...

Hit's ya right here, don't it? *Sniff.* Man, Love it when good music carries across emotion. Anyway, It does present a more peaceful side, and it's not lame. Anyone who says so... Well, they need dealt with, on the non-peaceful side. :P

The kick does stand out a little. It's not TERRIBLE, Per se, but it is a little interrupting. Maybe changing to something a little less intrusive?

~Sir_Furious