SirFurious's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[System Split - F-777]

Very strong and playful.

Very much like my computer when she breaks down. :P

Good job on the naming. While it's not a typical style for you, it's very good. Love how it's so... bouncy. :P Can't think up a better word. It's got a very "In yo face!" quality too.

Meh, words are failing right now. Just glad your back, and what an intro. XD

~Sir_Furious

F-777 responds:

Thanks man =). We NEED to skype more.

[+- Phases of Time -+]

Time passes like a drop in a bucket...

Very distinct, and each one individual... But it's not until the water has collected that you can see the reflection, and the beauty of the unbroken whole.

I like how it starts so distinct, and yet still builds to something completely different, yet still fitting. Transitions here are amazing, on all counts. And, Instrumentation is very good.

I agree. This is not you making the music... This is the music making itself through you. Er, I think. XD I know what you mean, just with writing. Sometimes it just happens, and you have no control. You wake up from a daze, and there's stuff like this waiting.

Maybe master the bass around 3:15-30-ish a bit... Make it a little less rough. Maybe it's just my speakers clipping, or something, but it doesn't help the effect.

Keep it up. Soothing, and invigorating. Trance it away!

~Sir_Furious

AikaMusic responds:

I have no clipping im on my surround sound and it sounds perfect to me :o!

[[GrayZ} Dream Trance {ReMiX}]

It's not clogging...

If there is improvement. I mean, This is AWESOME. There's more here than I remembered from the last ones, and I can't complain about any of it (Except one tiny thing... More on that later). But, if this were the same as the last one, plus 5 seconds, minus the clicking... Yeah, you wouldn't get much support there from me...

So, remember that difference. Don't repost... Remix is fine, because it's new, or it should be.

Now, that one thing. The ending. It's that slightly reverbed rapid fade. I think you can do better than that man. Have it climb, stop, kick back in, and have a long proper fade out, instead of 15 seconds of pulsing echos, if you get my drift.

Other than that, Keep going. You're on the road to epic. Now get there.

~Sir_Furious

GrayZ responds:

Thanks so much for your support, You're one of the main reasons I am improving and I must thank you for that. If I ever make it to epic awesome itunes standard I'll make sure you can have free albums. :) Thanks so much for your support man.

[ReMotion (prev) - Kr1z & F-777]

I've heard some tones to rythm...

But THIS is music. indescribably EPIC. Gratz, and thanks for the music.

~Sir_Furious

F-777 responds:

Thanks so much man!

[{GrayZ} Emotion]

Aye, Mastering...

The closing is also way to fast. AKA, it feels like it just stops, without a wind down. While that may be for emphasis or something, it's just not as good as a good wind down.

Anyone who votes this down is judging on other standards. You are GrayZ. I am judging you on the grounds of GrayZ, and not of X. If I were judging on the grounds of "X is awesome, you aren't", then you would get a 0. Some people can't change, so unless they give you good reasons, ignore the bombers.

Keep it up, and get mastering your own stuff. Being dependent upon others to get your own art done, whether it's music, or writing, can be crippling. So, the sooner your able to get it done yourself, then get there. You'll be thankful, trust me. :)

~Sir_Furious

GrayZ responds:

Thanks alot man I like how you review me on progress and not of other peoples skill, its really cool + is a really nice boost, I'll look at some guides on mastering and hopefully be able to keep stuff under 2284927438239492456 DB :P

thanks for the review

[{GrayZ} DnB Fuckabout]

It's good at what it's about...

But... Well... What happened to composition? :3

The bass is good, and the rhythm is pretty solid. Don't leave this behind. Finish it some day, and then let us see what you were/are capable of.

~Sir_Furious

GrayZ responds:

:) Thanks alot man was just a muck about really, I'll get it finished someday :) Thanks for been a solid reviewer! :D

[{GrayZ}] Emotion {DEMO}]

Mastering does need done...

But concepts work, eh?

The quaky feeling is nice. It's kinda setting a tone for a very Sci-Fi effect. Notice, how in all GOOD Sci-fi, where things are very diffrent, they are pointing out the steady things in humanity. Sometimes, it's greed, sometimes, it's love...

While the bass line is in flux, unstable, there is an evolving theme that remains steady in the melody through the whole thing. Moar plz. 8 because of mastering and... C'mon, I ain't giving a 10 on an unfinished work. :P

~Sir_Furious

GrayZ responds:

Thanks alot man! :) I'm still really new to composing on FL so I really don't know where to start with mastering + my friend who can master is on holiday atm =[ Thanks alot for the review :)

[GrayZ+F-777 Beyond the Dark.]

Sheer amazingness.

Here I go on loop number... I lost count.

Simple, yet beautiful. It's almost lyrical. This track tells a story, something that needs seen more in music. It starts out, and theres a solitary strength that groups with others and becomes stronger gradually. The instrumentation is great, the mixing is good, composition... Hold on, let me find something I don't like. Um... Ok, that's that.

More of this type of thing please. It makes me happy. I find myself running out of words on many reviews recently, but this is one of the few that I could spend an hour or two trying to find out what to say in the review.

GrayZ responds:

wow thanks alot man! :) I'm glad you noticed I put some feeling into it :)

Thanks so much for the support!

[TI:.Infinity 2008 [RM]]

Is ti wrong to say peaceful?

IDK if it's just me, but I chill to this kind of music. I find it nice and soothing. Instrumentation was good, mixing as well. Sadly, can't say anything about composition... I think that goes to the yet-unheard original. But, I liked it. Keep it up.

~Sir_Furious

TIMarbury responds:

Listen to the original!! It has lyrics and stuff which kinda kills how nice the melody and lead is at times. It is very soothing and chill, but has that kick to it in the lead part. Great song has like 27 mil views on youtube and stuff.

[[GZ] Just Starting.]

'Tis good.

As other have said, you need to watch the volumes and mix to keep it from drowning stuff out. It probably needs a break down, where you REALLY simplify it to the bare essentials, then comes back more developed than before. Music is a journey, and sometimes you need a quick breather before you get back on your way.

Turning out good, Liking what I'm hearing. I understand Writers block, which is kinda like Musicians block, only with words... Ahem, Anyway, You'll get past it. Sometimes, you just need to hammer around for a while to find where the inspiration went. 5/5, in case you wanted to know. :)

~Sir_Furious

GrayZ responds:

thanks so much man :) I'm going to learn how to master stuff real soon I have a really awesome teacher whos going to turn me pro :) Thanks so much for your review!